Dear Mrs Crown,

I am writing to apply for the position of a [Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:33:00 2009 ]nursery school teacher which was advertised in this week's issue of “ The Herald”.

I am a twenty-nine-years old nursery school teacher. Between 1993 and 1996 I had a Nursery Nurse course at the Standford Collage.

I have also completed a six -month Dance and Drama course for pre-school children at the Beton Colla[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:33:00 2009 ]e[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:33:00 2009 ]ge of Pr[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:33:00 2009 ]erf[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:34:00 2009 ]orming Arts. I have had few mounts [Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:34:00 2009 ]months' [Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:34:00 2009 ]experience of working which children. I had been working[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:34:00 2009 ]have worked[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:34:00 2009 ] as a [Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:34:00 2009 ]nursery assistant in Somerville Nursery School.

People say I am a hard-working and creative person. As my references[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:34:00 2009 ] show,[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:35:00 2009 ] that [Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:35:00 2009 ] I have a good relationship with children.

I enclose my CV and would be glad to attend an interview as soon as possible.

Your sincerely

May Luke

[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:35:00 2009 ]

I think it is a[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:38:00 2009 ] nice letter[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:35:00 2009 ], as it is well composed[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:37:00 2009 ]. It is a bit too short, though.[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:35:00 2009 ][Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:38:00 2009 ]

I like that it has relatively few mistakes. But on the other hand, some of them you could[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:36:00 2009 ] have[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:38:00 2009 ] corre[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:36:00 2009 ]c[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:37:00 2009 ]t[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:36:00 2009 ]ed[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:38:00 2009 ] [Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:36:00 2009 ]yourself (e.g. spelling mistakes).[Author ID1: at Wed Jun 3 21:37:00 2009 ]

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