Complaint Letter
A
letter of complaint, or complaint letter, is normally written to deal
with a problem situation when other attempts (i.e. phone contacts,
e-mails, etc.) have failed to rectify the situation.
The
complaint letter formalizes a problem situation by putting it into
writing and is usually the last resort to try to get a situation
resolved.
Properly
written complaint letters can be very powerful and almost always get
results, making them worth writing.
Although
complaint letters can be written for business situations (and often
are) the typical complaint letter involves a personal situation; i.e.
when a letter of complaint is written by an individual to a business
or another person.
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If you are writing a letter of complaint, here are some dos and don’ts that can help you get the right outcome:
Do
gather all your facts before you start writing the letter, e.g. where and when goods were bought, any customer reference numbers or invoice numbers, or a record of any previous communication with the company concerned.
get straight to the point and set out exactly what the problem is.
give all the relevant information in a clear and logical sequence.
state what action you want the company to take and when you expect them to have done this.
enclose copies of any relevant documents that support your case.
Don’t
use abusive language, however frustrated or angry you might feel.
allow yourself to get sidetracked from your specific problem into generalized criticism of the company or its products or services.
send your letter without checking it carefully for grammar or spelling mistakes.
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Writing a letter of complaint is something most people have to do at some point in their lives. Whether you're dissatisfied with a company's product or service, it is usually possible to resolve the issue in a mutually beneficial way through a firm but polite letter of complaint. Writing a complaint letter should not be complicated or scary - all you need to do is clearly state the facts and politely request a resolution.
How to write a Complaint Letter to the Company
1. Address your letter to the customer service department. When writing a letter of complaint, your best chance of success will come from directing the letter to the customer service department of the company. The customer service department is accustomed to dealing with complaints and your letter is likely to be processed efficiently and effectively.[1]
Try to find out the name of the customer service manager or director and address your letter to them personally. Begin your letter with Dear Mr, Mrs, Miss or Ms followed by their surname. If you cannot find the name of the customer service manager, simply write Dear Sir or Madam.[2]
You should be able to find the address of the customer service department on the company's website, on any of the company's promotional or advertising materials or product packaging or labels.[1]
2.Quickly get to the point of your letter. The very first line of your letter should clearly address why your are writing the letter and what your exact complaint is. Give as many pertinent facts as possible, including the date, time and location where you made the purchase or received the service, along with any relevant serial or model numbers.
The recipient of the letter should be able to identify the point of the letter in under five seconds, so avoid any long, rambling intros.
You may provide further detail or explanation of the situation in the paragraph following your opening sentence, but the first line should draw attention to your complaint as succinctly as possible.
For example, your opening sentence might read: "I am writing to complain about a faulty hair dryer that I purchased from your company on the 15th of July at your location on First Street, Exampletown."
3.State specifically what outcome or remedy will satisfy you. If you want a replacement, a refund, a repair, or some other form of compensation, state this clearly in your second paragraph. This will help to avoid receiving a form letter or other stock response, and give the recipient something to work with on their end.
Try to be as constructive as possible in your comments, suggesting a way that you can move forward and continue your relationship with the company. If you demand a refund or some other form of compensation, while simultaneously informing them that you plan on taking your business elsewhere, they will have little incentive to try and resolve the problem.[1]
If you would like the company to correct a broader problem, state that in your letter as well, but recognize that such a thing may take time.
Do not threaten legal action in your first communication. It may be the solution you ultimately require, but send your complaint letter first and await a response.
Attach copies of supporting documents. These may include receipts, guarantees, warranties, copies of checks you sent and, if appropriate, photos or videos. All documentation should be included with your letter.
Make sure that you send copies of any documentation you wish to include, not the originals. That way, there's no chance of this key information being lost or mislaid, should you need to provide evidence to someone else.
Also make sure to state in the body of the letter the exact materials you are including. For example: "Please find attached a copy of my original receipt, along with a copy of the hair dryer's guarantee and information regarding the serial number."
4.Attach copies of supporting documents. These may include receipts, guarantees, warranties, copies of checks you sent and, if appropriate, photos or videos. All documentation should be included with your letter.
Make sure that you send copies of any documentation you wish to include, not the originals. That way, there's no chance of this key information being lost or mislaid, should you need to provide evidence to someone else.
Also make sure to state in the body of the letter the exact materials you are including. For example: "Please find attached a copy of my original receipt, along with a copy of the hair dryer's guarantee and information regarding the serial number."
5.Give them a time limit to resolve the matter. It is helpful to provide an exact time period within which you would like the issue to be resolved. This will give you peace of mind and will help bring the issue to a speedy conclusion.
Providing a time limit will also help to prevent the possibility of your letter becoming lost or forgotten about, which may lead to further awkwardness and resentment between you and the company.[3]
Just make sure that the time period you provide is reasonable. A week or two is usually sufficient, though this will vary depending on what your requests are.
6.Finish the letter respectfully. Thank the recipient for their assistance, and let them know how and when they can reach you to resolve the matter. This will make their job a lot easier, resulting in a more efficient outcome for you.
Sign off the letter with Yours sincerely, if you know the name of the person you are writing to, or Yours faithfully if you referred to them as "Sir" or "Madam". Avoid informal closings such as "Best," or "Yours truly."[2]
Achieving the Correct Tone and Format
1.Be polite. You may be angry, and may have every right to be, but being rude will only put the recipient on the defensive. Write in a respectful tone and avoid making threatening, angry or sarcastic comments at all costs. Remember that the person reading your letter was not directly responsible for whatever happened, and they will be much more responsive and willing to please a gracious, polite customer than an angry, accusatory one.
Remember, the company to which you are writing probably isn't out to get you, intentionally. Most companies have an interest in their customer's satisfaction.
You will have much better success treating the recipient as somebody who wants to help you, rather than assuming they're filled with malicious intent.
Don't write when you're furious. Wait to write your letter until you have calmed down. Or if you wish, write the letter while you are fully steamed, and then let it sit for a day or two before you send it. In all likelihood, you will want to rephrase things in a less-incendiary way.
2.Be concise. Customer service representatives may receive as many as hundreds of letters a day, so it's vital that you get to the point quickly, so they know exactly what they're dealing with as soon as they begin reading. If your letter is too long or detailed, the reader will be inclined to skim its contents and end up with an unclear idea of the exact problem or your desired resolution.[1]
Avoid superfluous detail or going off on long rants or tangents.
Try to keep your letter on a single page, or under about 200 words.
3.Be authoritative. Being authoritative in your letter creates the right tone and lets the company know that your complaint is to be taken seriously. This is especially true of more serious complaints, which may have considerable financial implications.[1]
Being authoritative encompasses a range of things, such as the quality of the language used, your knowledge of your rights and the company's responsibilities, as well as the professional presentation of the letter.[1]
All of these things give you credibility, which should positively effect the response to your letter.
4.Format your letter in a clean, correct way. As mentioned above, formatting your letter in a professional way can favorably influence how your complaint is received. Include your name, address and the date in the top right-hand corner, followed by the name or title of the person you are writing to, along with the company's address, on the left-hand side, just above the body of the letter.
Always type up your letter on a computer, this makes it easier to read and is much cleaner looking. If you must hand write your letter, make sure your writing is clear and legible, with no crossed out words or ink smudges.
To write your signature, leave a blank space under the Yours faithfully or Yours sincerely where you can write in your signature by hand. Underneath this space you should also type your name so it is easily read.
Keep the letter tidy and well-spaced, with paragraphs of approximately equal-size.
5.Check spelling and grammar. Incorrect spelling and grammar can negatively influence how your complaint is received. Make sure to do a spell check on your computer before printing the letter, or have someone else read it over before you send it.
Following up
1.Wait until the time limit you provided is up. Be patient and do not pursue any further action until the time limit you provided in your initial letter is up. If this date passes and you still haven't heard anything, you may follow up with a phone call or email to check if the letter was received. It is always best to give the company the benefit of the doubt.
If you still do not receive any information regarding your letter or if you do but the situation was not handled to your satisfaction, you can proceed by addressing your complaint to someone higher on the chain of command.
2.Proceed along the chain of command. If you are unsuccessful in your dealings with the customer service director, try to find out who the next person in the chain of command is and reach out to them instead. Each time you move up the ladder, whether it's from Customer Rep to Supervisor to Director to Vice President to CEO, attach the correspondence you have had at the previous level. This will update your new company representative and very possibly get the matter resolved in a non-litigious way.
It is better to start with the customer service department before working your way up instead of going to straight to the top. This is because the customer service department are more used to dealing with these types of complaints and any letters addressed to the CEO will probably be referred back to this department anyway.[1]
If this is the case, the employees of the customer service department might automatically regard you unfavorably, as you tried to go over their heads.[1]
Be aware that if you are writing a letter to a CEO or Managing Director, it will need to be extra clear, concise and well-written, as they will have no prior knowledge of the incident.
3.If you wish to pursue legal action, see an attorney. He or she will know how to proceed. Keep in mind that legal action should be your last resort and leading with it in your letter sets a negative tone and will derail any requests for compensation you may ask for at the same time. It also may come back to bite you if your bluff is called.
Tips
Before you write, take some time and reflect on what has occurred. When you have thought the whole thing out and know just what you want and how you want to ask for it, you will be ready to write your letter.
Be sure your letter includes your name, address, e-mail, and phone number (home, work and cell if possible). Also, be sure to ask for the reader's information as well so that you can both keep abreast of any progress regarding your complaint.
Read it over and be positive that everything is truthful, sincere, and verifiable.
Don't swear. Remember that what you want is recompense or resolution, and offending your reader will not accomplish that. If you'd like to use stronger language,avoid the passive voice and use words that are more direct and descriptive. Perhaps you were appalled or even revolted, stronger words than simply disappointed.
Submitting your complaint in writing has a stronger effect than sending the company an email, fax, or a comment on their blog or website. Most companies treat formal written complaints with a higher priority.
Do not send sworn letters of witnesses. In fact, if you think you might wind up in court over this, you might want to hold back not only the witness's statement but her name as well. Remember, too, that court is likely to be costly. It is better in most cases to seek an agreement informally, or at most through arbitration.
If you are writing to complain about a specific person, limit your letter to their shortcomings and do not disparage the organization as a whole. If you are writing to complain about a policy of the company, do not insult the listener or the policy. Simply state your problem and how you want it to be resolved.
There are consumer websites where you can voice your complaints as well as see if others have been in the same situation with that particular company.
Keep copies of all correspondence and the dates your letters were sent.
Warnings
It is illegal to write a letter that contains language threatening physical violence, destruction of property, or assault to health or safety. A threat can be interpreted as harassment and grounds for action in a court of law, and is can be subject to penalties ranging from fines to prison time. Do yourself a favor and put threats out of mind. Do not put them in writing and send them!
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Examples of letters complaining about 1.a faulty product, 2.unsatisfactory workmanship, 3.a disappointing holiday, and 4.a leaking radiator in a rented flat.
Jenny Hawkins
8 Dean Close
NEWFORD
NW3 2NY
11 November 2007
Customer Services Manager
Evans Electrical Products
7 Swan Street
Brampton
BR2 1RW
Dear Sir or Madam
RE: EasyIron Electric Iron (Model no: 2279)
I bought the above iron from The Electrical Store in Newford on 10 October 2005. On using it for the first time, I found that the temperature control was faulty; it was not possible to set it for any temperature apart from the highest (cotton).
When I returned the iron to the store, they said that they were unable to replace it or offer me a refund, but that it could be sent away for repair. As I need an iron on a daily basis, and it was not clear how long the repair would take, this option was unsatisfactory. As the iron clearly does not function as it should and therefore does not comply with the legal standards of product quality, I am therefore writing to you to ask for a full refund of the price (£35.99).
I look forward to hearing from you within the next fortnight.
Yours faithfully
Jenny Hawkins (Ms)
2. Patrick Bowles
12 Scuttle Street
Fenwick
FR1 6MN
7 April 2008
Mr D Hampton
Manager
Sunshine Blinds
20 Apollo Road
Fenwick
FR1 7TB
Dear Mr Hampton,
Fiesta blackout roller blind
I am writing to complain about the faulty installation of the above blackout blind to my bedroom window. This was fitted by Mr Brand from your company on Monday 29 March. That same evening I discovered the mechanism was not working and that it was impossible to either raise or lower the blind.
I phoned your company the following morning and Mr Brand returned 3 days later to repair the fault. However, although the blind worked for the first few days after his visit, it then jammed once more. When I phoned again on 6 April to report this fault, I was told that no one would be available to visit me for two weeks.
As I regularly work at nights and this blind is the only means of blocking out daylight, it is vital that it is functioning properly so I can sleep during the day. I therefore would appreciate it if you would ensure that someone returns to replace the blind by the end of the week.
Yours sincerely
Patrick Bowles (Dr)
3.
5 High View
Newborough
NB1 3RS
22 August 2007
Mr R T Black
Customer Services Department
Sunny Holidays
PO Box 4
Brampton
BR4 3JH
Dear Mr Black
Holiday Reference Number: CT2118M
Following our telephone conversation earlier today, I am writing to give details of my dissatisfaction with my holiday at the New Hotel, Los Christianos, Tenerife (10 to 18 August 2005) that I booked with your company for myself and my family.
My central complaint is that the hotel fell far short of the description in the brochure. We had booked two double en-suite rooms (numbers 213 and 214); although said to be four-star accommodation, the bedrooms were very cramped and the furnishings worn and dirty. In addition to this, the toilet was blocked in room 214 and the shower wasn’t working in room 213. The hotel’s grounds, described in the brochure as ‘pleasant, tranquil, and spacious’ were in fact bordered on two sides by a very busy main road, while the swimming pool was closed the entire week for repairs.
When we spoke to your representative (Tracey Mills), she promised to try to get the shower and toilet fixed but this took an unacceptably long time to happen – 3 days from when we first complained. I asked her to fill out a holiday report form detailing these issues and enclose a copy for your information, together with photos of the bedrooms and the hotel grounds.
As stated in my telephone call, I feel that we are due a full refund for this holiday as it failed to meet the description in the brochure, together with compensation to make up for the fact our holiday was ruined.
I look forward to hearing from you within the next fortnight.
Yours sincerely
Maria Johnson (Mrs)
4.
Flat 122a
Fordham Way
Kington
KG8 6LP
6 November 2009
Mr G J Warren
18 Hurst Rise
Lower Minford
MN5 3TR
Dear Mr Warren
Essential repairs: Flat 122a Fordham Way, Kington
Further to my telephone calls on 1 and 4 November about the leaking radiator in the main bedroom, I am writing to express my concern that repair work has not yet been carried out.
As I stressed when we spoke, this leak is causing a very damp patch near to an electrical socket and as a result I have been unable to use the socket for my PC for a week. Apart from the dangerous aspects of this situation, it is also causing me much inconvenience and disrupting my studies, as I have to use the power point in the shared living room instead.
I would be grateful if you could arrange for the radiator to be fixed within the next two days.Please contact me as soon as possible to let me know when the heating engineer will arrive, so that I can be at the flat to show him the extent of the problem.
Yours sincerely
Daniel Simmons
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