Mirei Hirota

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This is a suitable layout for the beginning of a report.

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Missing word or words - The missing word you need is 'in'. Try to learn the phrase: 'in response to...'

Have

Verb form - 'has'

As (4)

'to be'

out

Spelling

sight seeing {5}

Spelling - This is usually spelt as one word (sightseeing) or with a hyphen (sight-seeing)

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Article error

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Article error - You need an article here: 'the Royal Park Hotel'

I hope that above will meet your request, but if you need further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.{7}

This is well phrased but it sounds a bit like you are ending a letter, rather than concluding a report. You could, instead, just give a summary of what you have written.

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