Elena Borzova

I've seen {1}

Verb tense - It would be better to say simply 'I saw...'.

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Poor word choice - This word doesn't quite collocate with 'competition'. You could use a number of other adjectives; 'important', 'exciting', 'fascinating', etc.
'Alluring' is used to describe people, places or things that we are very attracted to.

You

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No wonder that{3}

What about beginning: 'Perhaps, not surprisingly'...'?

. I've always been fond of travelling

Well-constructed phrase or sentence

Could (4)

'can'

compeled

Spelling

have ever tasted of journey{5}

You could say: '... (people) who have ever experienced the thrill/excitement of an unknown journey...'

neither more, nor less{6}.

Not quite right. The expression is 'no more, no less'.

nobliest {7}

Spelling - The correct spelling is 'noblest', although it looks a bit strange!

profession

Singular/plural error

labour-{8}

Do you mean something like 'labour-intensive'?

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Article error - by 'the age of ...'

arrived

Poor word choice - You can say 'reached my goal'.

mean

believe/consider

{...}

Yes! I agree.

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