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5-A

Now, lt’s Time for the Real Test.

A Critique: Example 4

•    The face arrangement is basically fine although some minor adjustments need to be madę.

•    Definitely draw in the righf ear even though only a tiny bit will be visible.

•    Practice drawing the hand and fingers.

•    Take care with the clothes' design. The right breast is defined but it looks as if she hasn't got a left one. Use shading to define both breasts.

•    Be audacious and soften the movement ot the hair and clothes fluttering in the breeze.

•    Ił you shade in the inside ot the sleeves, the materiał won't look paper-thin.

•    It would be better to put highlights in this character's hair. Also, it looks dry and dishevelled unless the hair is separated into several bunches.

•    Too many wrinkles in the legwarmers.