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Now, lt's Time for the Real Test.

A Critigue: Example 6

•    Meaningless lines are drawn on the thighs and calves. No matter how athletic she is, this is overdoing it.

•    Take care with the directions of the arms and the back ot the hand. Pose in tront a mirror to look at how certain poses would look.

•    Compared with the upper body, the lower body is too sparse in detail. You need to draw with morę feeling for the subject. Don't draw pointed fold lines.

•    If you color the fringe that falls over the face, it looks too heavy. It would be better to divide the hair up and have it sticking out.

•    Draw this pose bolder because the original one doesn't go all the way.