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Now, lt's Time for the Real Test

A Critique: Example 7

Checklist

•    It looks as if the character holding something was a second thought. If you want to use objects to enhance the character's individualism, then morę planning is necessary.

•    It is unnatural to hołd a gun in the right hand when there is already one in the gun holster. It is really difficult to draw someone holding a gun, so just draw it sitting in the holster.

•    The hairstyle is rather obscure. Draw a morę distinct style.

•    The holster and the belt have not been drawn in enough detail. The holster in particular is an important accessory so make surę you draw it morę caretully.