Geo

Welcome to the 7th edition of the International Festival of Arts and Culture, which will take place this year in the town of Venus. {1}

GOOD

new

Word form -Normally we'd say 'newly-built'.

noisy{3}

'lively' might be a better choice - it has fewer negative connotations!

fish based {4}

Punctuation - Only a quibble: 'fish-based'

moon light {5}.

Word form - 'moonlight'

The prices here are not exaggerated, they are accessible.{6}

I suggest: 'The prices here are not exorbitant, but well within most people's budget'.

Anyway,{7}

Is this the right way to begin this sentence? What about: 'As you would expect...'

Of (8)

Wrong or misused preposition - 'for' is better

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