Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with reference to the advertisement placed on your website.
I am a nineteen-year-old student from Poland. As I have been looking for a course in English at not very high level I found your course very interesting and I would like to attend your language school.
However, I would be grateful if you could give me more details about the course.
As the price quoted is very high for me and my family, I wonder if you could offer a discount.
I would also like to know if I receive a certificate at the end of the course. This would prove most useful in my portfolio when I apply for Warsaw University of Technology.
Finally, I would like to ask how many hours of the course are devoted to conversation because this is my weakest area and it has to be improved.
I really appreciate your help and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with reference to the advertisement placed on your website.
I am a nineteen-year-old student from Poland. As I have been looking for a course in English at not very high level I found your course very interesting and I would like to attend your language school.
However, I would be grateful if you could give me more details about the course.
As the price quoted is very high for me and my family, I wonder if you could offer a discount.
I would also like to know if I receive a certificate at the end of the course. This would prove most useful in my portfolio when I apply for Warsaw University of Technology.
Finally, I would like to ask how many hours of the course are devoted to conversation because this is my weakest area and it has to be improved.
I really appreciate your help and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ